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Vultron
Stripcreator Newbie

I'm Vultron and I'm new here on stripcreator. Anyway, I want your guys opinion on my comics before I continue.

http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/Vultron/

3-02-09 1:19pm (new)
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crabby
I have an awesome avatar.

Member Rated:

I just want to validate your existence.

3-02-09 9:48pm (new)
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AngryAmerican
Here at least 3 times a year

Member Rated:

I have read your comics. Maybe stripping isn't for you, or maybe you should just try to be funnier.

I hope this wasn't discouraging for you.

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Kill Whitey.

3-03-09 6:16pm (new)
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evil_d
Riding through your town with his head on fire

Member Rated:

There are kernels of humor here, but you bury them under a lot of dialogue that isn't funny or necessary. Try this exercise: next time you write a comic, before you save it, go through and delete as much text as you can without sacrificing the integrity of the joke.

Keep at it, good luck, welcome to Stripcreator. 

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The what mentioned above is total fiction. Please don't take it seriously!

3-04-09 9:22am (new)
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