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Smilin' Bob's latest strip is critiqued by veterans......
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| The text sucks regardless of the characters. | |
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| Yeah, the punctuation/capitalization is distracting. | |
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| There's no storey arc, no structure; the strip lacks coherence | |
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| When he has a punch line, you can see it coming for miles! | |
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| And the guy's drawing really stinks! | |
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