ei there, these are my first two attempts at writting comics, so tell me what you think
. Be nice. Or be brutal. Or be grim and frostbitten. Just read and comment.

[Click to view comic: 'Its the Unreal Thing']

[Click to view comic: 'The Spandextastic adventures of Future Sergay']

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There was once a man who said:"nothing is true!". Although later it was found out that he was lying.

#1: mmmmmmmmmmm . . uh
#2: ha!
quote: ha and ha

eh heh....

meh.

The second one was good.

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I will rate you hard, and unendingly.

The 2nd one was quite good. The first one wasn't quite good enough to be "crappy."

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

I so concur.

1st one = drab driech day.

2nd one = sunny with occasional outbreaks of bwah ha.

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GOVT. Warning: Do not smoke around children they will badger you for fags.

thanks for the opinions. Yeah the first one come's out like a very bad trip on Kool Aid, i guess.

[Click to view comic: 'The SpandexTastic Adventures of Future Sergay-2']

[Click to view comic: 'Its the Unreal Thing - Trigguer Happy God']

[Click to view comic: 'Its the Unreal Thing - Great Moments in Bliblical History II']

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There was once a man who said:"nothing is true!". Although later it was found out that he was lying.

Your last comic has been done a million times but from what I see, you're on the path to some pure comic gold. =D

i think those are very good also

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xx( o Y o. )xx

I would have to agree.

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...and pain joined his urge to percieve...

Wow, i'm very impressed. Bravo!

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jolly_roger2

Ei thanks everyone for their feedback!
Its hard working up to a good punchline in just 3 panels (expecially if you're a n00b =p).
Practise make's perfect.

[Click to view comic: 'Its the Unreal Thing - Great Moments in Biblical History IV']

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There was once a man who said:"nothing is true!". Although later it was found out that he was lying.

Melkor, your name AND your comics rock. I love LOTR.

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Tout le monde est merde!!!