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d_meyer
Stripcreator Newbie

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I got this idea from someone elses comic so I came up with this. Any good?
[Click to view comic: 'Scramjet']

7-12-05 8:31am (new)
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OmniMarconi67
Jesus's Official Spokesman

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The comic is very cohesive, has good grammar and spelling, and a coherent transition from frame to frame. It isn't random (except for your choice of character sprites), and the characters fit their roles well. It has everything a good comic has. Except funniness, it just wasn't funny. Everything else about it was good though, so get some funny and you'll be all set.

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If you do just one thing in life, then you need to get out more and expand your horizons. Honestly, that one thing can't possibly take-up all your time.

7-12-05 9:43am (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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I agree. There should be a fourth panel with an actual joke in it. Then it'd be hilarous.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

7-12-05 9:45am (new)
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UnknownEric
and the Goblet of Mountain Dew.

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I thought the cowboy thinking "Shit!" was the punchline.

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I has a flavor!

7-12-05 9:57am (new)
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matclarke
herpes laden mug

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Yeah, shit seemed like the punchline. Not bad!

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obscenity filter is off

7-12-05 10:01am (new)
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pottedmeat
Stripcreator Newbie

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If its not Scottish its CRAP!

7-12-05 3:09pm (new)
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HCRoyall
100mg Thorazine, Please

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Who the fuck are you?

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It was such a waste of everyone’s time and money that even the Tokyo stadium’s rape robots apologized– something they were programmed specifically never to do.

7-13-05 1:19am (new)
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DragonXero
I'm Here, You're Queer, Get Used to it

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I'm not horribly impressed, but someone's been doing his homework and can actually write a comic without sinking to poor grammar/spelling or injokes from other sites. Way to go!

Now just funny it up a bit and you're ready to roll.

Oh, pottedmeat? Go drink a bottle of scotch and drown in the atlantic. We have enough scots here, we don't need arrogant, unfunny ones with no comics too.

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Do you want ants? Because that's how you get ants.

7-13-05 3:48am (new)
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