What a shame.
You seem to have a sense of humor in there somewhere, but your comics are just slapped out there with no thought. Work from the perspective of a 3rd person who hasn't seen the comic before and ask yourself
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[*] Does the dialog make sense the way it flows?
[*] Is the joke predictable or given away too soon?
[*] Is the joke so fucking old that you shouldn't even bother?
[*] Is the comic's sole source of humor the fact that it uses strong language?
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Be more conscious of this stuff and you'll be a better stripper.
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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002
