Just started today....thanks!
mike

You overuse the narration panels. I'll refrain from passing further comment.

I think there was a fart of genius here.....

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Is it wrong? I don't think so...

What the world needs now is comics about Tony Danza. Lots of 'em...

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"And Wirthling isn't worth the paper he isn't printed on."

Errr... quit using the yellow narration boxes quite so much, that's a start.

Don't have characters speak from right to left in a panel.

Ummm... after those two pieces of advice, I guess the only thing left to say is that I didn't think they were very funny.

Defintely too much a Tony Danza thing going on there. Big Evil Dan... do you look like Tony Danza?

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...Trot and Cap'n Bill were free from anxiety and care. Button-Bright never worried about anything. The Scarecrow, not being able to sleep, looked out of the window and tried to count the stars.

AAAAUUURRRGGGHHH!

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Good fucking job Mccase. You turned josh's eye sockets into smoking holes.

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Do you want ants? Because that's how you get ants.

Yeah, really... how dare he suceed where I've failed so many times in the past?

He should be hung. Hanged?
No, wait, he shouldn't, I won't stoop that low, after all, I am pure love.

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Do you want ants? Because that's how you get ants.

I thought TOBOR was pure love.

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...Trot and Cap'n Bill were free from anxiety and care. Button-Bright never worried about anything. The Scarecrow, not being able to sleep, looked out of the window and tried to count the stars.

Smoking manholes, thank you very much.

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Ocular rape. The sport of kings.

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