[Click to view comic: 'Vroom Vroom']

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Davan-PeeJee, explain and explain quickly. PeeJee-Well, first I thought, who wanted a candy cane shaped dildo for Christmas? Then I thought, who deserves it?

That comic is all right.  Good set up, but I expected more from the punchline.

You really don't need a separate thread to post each of your comics in, though.  Especially when your comic directly references the comic posted in the other thread.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

I just went back and read your first comic.  That one I liked:

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

Thanks for reading and for the constructive critcism (sp?) I'm new so I wasn't really sure where to put my comics. And yeah, I'm not too good with punchlines yet. Hopefully, I'll get a little better.

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Davan-PeeJee, explain and explain quickly. PeeJee-Well, first I thought, who wanted a candy cane shaped dildo for Christmas? Then I thought, who deserves it?

[Click to view comic: 'A Really Stupid Comic']

Just posted a new one. I kinda hate it but....whatever.

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Davan-PeeJee, explain and explain quickly. PeeJee-Well, first I thought, who wanted a candy cane shaped dildo for Christmas? Then I thought, who deserves it?

Wow, you just started and you already have four stars!  :0

I really like your comics, please keep them coming!  :D

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Penguins are taking over the universe. Just ask Stuper Dan! SD: ? Yes. That's right. He's knows SO much about it he's clueless!

[Click to view comic: 'We Are Rebels']

Hot of the griddle, another worthless comic!

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Davan-PeeJee, explain and explain quickly. PeeJee-Well, first I thought, who wanted a candy cane shaped dildo for Christmas? Then I thought, who deserves it?

that is very interesting

please tell me more

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xx( o Y o. )xx

Your comics are good.  Yay.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

I don't like your screen name. I also thought your comics were presentable and diligent.

Great job!

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You don't know what I got... .

I'd say something like "These comics are akin to eating a warm piece of toast," but "I like them" will suffice.

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the kid's getting old, the kid's getting old

I don't know what it is that makes people good at comics, but I think you have an abnormally large supply of it.

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The tongue licking the ars of pretension.

[Click to view comic: 'It's A Small World After All']

Thank you all very much for the encouragement! Here's another comic!

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Davan-PeeJee, explain and explain quickly. PeeJee-Well, first I thought, who wanted a candy cane shaped dildo for Christmas? Then I thought, who deserves it?

sigh.

 i was going to say something mean but i just don't have the energy.

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Kill Whitey.

AngryAmerican

More!  :D

I ish addicted.  Like really...

You sure your comics aren't made from marijuana?

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Penguins are taking over the universe. Just ask Stuper Dan! SD: ? Yes. That's right. He's knows SO much about it he's clueless!

That last one I didn't enjoy so much.

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The tongue licking the ars of pretension.

They're alright. They didn't offend me at least.

A few of them are clever and/or interesting, but without much of a punchline.

As far as first batches of comics go though, two thumbs up my ass.

I think you're working on some funny ideas, but they seem to sort of fall flat at the end. I think a turn off for me is the cigarette saying nonsensical things in the last frame of the comic. I find them distracting, and I think, for me at least, the comics would be funnier if it weren't saying anything.

Keep up the good work!

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100 pounds of shit in a 25 pound sack.

OR IF THE CIGARETTE OPENS THE GATE TO THE MOUNTAINS OF MADNESS and like James Earl Jones is up there sitting and eating a delicious sandwich.

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possible savior probable SEX MACHINE