I blog. Am sometimes funny. But I don't draw. (BTW, thanks to ForumUsers - Dexx & Dragonxero - for letting me use their characters.) So here's the premier of Bloggin' Outloud - the comic strip. Thoughts?

[Click to view comic: 'Bloggin' Outloud']

Maybe this one will get some folks riled up as it's a bit political.

[Click to view comic: 'Bloggin' Outloud']

I dunno, these just don't do it for me. There's a setup, and a soft punchline... I should be at least cracking a grin.

They read a little like sunday strips, though.

In any case, keep making more.

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the kid's getting old, the kid's getting old

i am very riled up.

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Kill Whitey.

That political comic has enraged me!

Why does the "lead" character of the strip walk away at the end of both of these comics.

As far as new user comics go, these are super.

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Mediocrity at its most average.

Thanks for the sarcasm AA & CP ... mo' funny than my strip I suppose :-) And LG, appreciate the feedback. To answer your question AC I guess with my "concluding" visual I'm trying to make the punch line seem more "dry" - ie, leaves you pondering and then a smile, rather than a laugh out loud. Leaves one hanging a bit... Thanks for the feedback. No clue really as to what I'm doing. GT

Nobody here's got a fucking clue - just keep up the good start and don't stop making them like you've quit everything else in your life (yeah, I know how you are).

They're really good. Damn me, I posted in the wrong forum looking for comments on my comics. Somebody read (ok, just look) at them please!

Thanks a ton!

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I like the first one.  

I think the second one is more political commentary than comedic.

Keep on stripping.  

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