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Herschel_Dirtwater
Stripcreator Newbie

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I'm new to this site, and I've put up a handful of strips to get started.  I'm not really sure in which direction I want to go, and these first 4 strips are as different as can be.  I hope you enjoy them, and of course, any constructive criticism is appreciated.  I'll even accept emotional outbursts and flat-out insulting gibberish as I've heard it all before (I went to high school y'know).

 [Click to view comic: 'Steamroller Blues']

[Click to view comic: 'Bad Standup']

[Click to view comic: 'In Bad Taste (pun intended)']

[Click to view comic: 'A poor attempt at political humor?']

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"I am Jack's raging bile duct."

1-16-08 7:06pm (new)
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Herschel_Dirtwater
Stripcreator Newbie

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My apologies.  Watergate was actually 35 years ago.  Math fails me with a bottle of cheap cabernet in my belly.

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"I am Jack's raging bile duct."

1-16-08 7:34pm (new)
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crabby
I have an awesome avatar.

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Great screen name!

I liked "In bad taste." Keep up the comic stripping.

1-16-08 7:34pm (new)
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kissMyCartoon
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The second two were the funniest.  Although the island one did leave me feeling icky.

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"Are you an aethist?" "Yes, I'm from Brooklyn" ~Angel Heart

1-17-08 5:25am (new)
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not_Scyess
not laughing with you

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I didn't really find any of these comics funny, but they are great first attempts and show great potential for great stripping.  I look forward to your next round.

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peddling the funny around since 09/24/2002

1-17-08 10:31am (new)
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AngryAmerican
Here at least 3 times a year

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in bad taste made the effort of reading your comics worth it.

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Kill Whitey.

1-17-08 2:33pm (new)
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Trey_Suckabeefio
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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Sorry I don't have any technical or more specific advice, but I'm with notscyess; none of those really did much for me, but they were well-made. I get the feeling that I will enjoy reading more of your comics, so I'll keep an eye out for them.

1-17-08 3:18pm (new)
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LuckyGuess
hm

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You have the potential to make some really great stuff. Keep it up.

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the kid's getting old, the kid's getting old

1-17-08 5:46pm (new)
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Herschel_Dirtwater
Stripcreator Newbie

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I appreciate all the responses.  As I do more and more, I'll surely improve, and I might even make funny strips.  Who knows?

[Click to view comic: 'Eyewitness Compassion']

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"I am Jack's raging bile duct."

1-19-08 4:54pm (new)
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Herschel_Dirtwater
Stripcreator Newbie

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[Click to view comic: 'The Anatomy of Love?']

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"I am Jack's raging bile duct."

1-19-08 5:20pm (new)
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AngryAmerican
Here at least 3 times a year

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i rated eyewitness 'good'

the next one had a punchline as obvious as that thing on aaron neville's face.

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Kill Whitey.

1-20-08 1:25pm (new)
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AmishSunshine
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"Invalid comic" Hahaha!

I think something's wrong with my computer

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Two Iraqis walked into a bar...

1-20-08 5:04pm (new)
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Trey_Suckabeefio
Pink Donkey Wrangler

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"Eyewitness Compassion" is really good.

1-21-08 11:14am (new)
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