Yeah I just would like some feedback, on my comics are my jokes gems or crappy pieces of coal, still useful but noone really cares. Just click my name and read if you feel yourself getting woozy you may be experiencing terrible comedy. Also a few misplaced words and misspelled words. Anyway rate it over all, 1 to 10, 1 being lowest and 10 beign highest. Much Obliged buddies

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Once upon a time there was a story that didn't make any sense

good start, id say seven and five eighths out of ten

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I read about 6-7 of them. They have great structure, grammar, and decent timing.

What they need more of is funny. Clever is OK, but funny is where you want to go.

Please make more, there is much promise in you young grasshopper.

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Kill Whitey.