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Spaceclutch
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http://www.stripcreator.com/comics/Spaceclutch

 

4-09-11 9:17am (new)
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Spaceclutch
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#$@. I hate being a newbie. I don't think I put the link in properly for the comic to show up. Also, you'll probably notice a few typos in the strip here and there. I made a donation so I could edit them, but it hasn't processed yet. Hope you like them anyway!

4-09-11 9:20am (new)
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Mr. Wonderful

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Everybody's a newbie once.  Just paste the comic's URL into the reply box like this:

[Click to view comic: 'Robort and Toothy']

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4-09-11 10:16am (new)
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Spaceclutch
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Awesome. Thanks! Here's my latest addition:

 

[Click to view comic: 'Robort and Tooty Go to Libya']

4-09-11 10:33am (new)
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smamurai
Too orangey for crows

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I really like the premise of two guys working in a crumbling business, having to scrabble for food and darkly regressing into pathetic primitive animals without morals.

I think the chars should swap position in the Easter bunny strip. Maybe cut some lines and words in strips. Don't over-explain things. My first comics are too wordy with me trying to be a scriptwriter in 3 panels and it's hard work for the reader.

This was the advice I was given when I first started whoring myself.

The guy asking to borrow a newspaper was brilliant.

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4-09-11 11:24am (new)
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Spaceclutch
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Good advice. Thanks!

I see what you mean about swapping chars around.

Thanks for the comments. :) The next one should be better and have less typos hopefully. I do some of these on my iPhone, so it's easy to screw them up.

4-09-11 2:27pm (new)
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Mr. Wonderful

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I know it was a mistype, but I like "Tooty" as a name for that character.

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4-09-11 8:42pm (new)
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