Hi. This is my first strip(well number two really). Any one want to provide some constructive criticism?

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Homer: "I understand. Let us celebrate our agreement with the adding of chocolate to milk."

red X will cornhole you now!!!

sorry, but I just imagined my own comic instead of reading yours, the one I imagined was boring and predictable.

(reads comic)

wow, I must be psychic or something!

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Come ahead then!

I agree, the red X is quite unoriginal now. Though it's nice to see people still have that idea of new comics, that was his second one, I'm curious what colour X his first one was.

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I am not 16 going on not 17, I know that I'm naive.

Don't pluralize with an apostrophe.

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"And Wirthling isn't worth the paper he isn't printed on."

Yeah, it's like your saying "comic is". Wirthling, I think you should have said that in Dr.Pedantic mode.

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you're

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"And Wirthling isn't worth the paper he isn't printed on."

Yeh.

Dont make comics number 3 and 4.

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"Life Sucks, Then you Die. The bit inbetween isnt very funny either"

I meant to put "your post is".

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Is MARK LONG planned as a thread?
Will he be offering the president a pretzel next?
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Is it wrong? I don't think so...

Needs more sodomy.

-DH1

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Needs more sodomy.