Hey could i get some constructive criticism ova here ?pleez!?!? these arent up to par of the ones i write an draw on my own in the material world but i work with whats here an make the best of it.Man this is a cool site im glad i went to ratemypoo.com an hit a link or 2 ta get here.I like this place can i hang i promise ill help pay rent....

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"Watch me as i do my pee pee dance.... ya better hurry up or ill mess my pants" Sung to the tune of the german dance song by cartman

Are you speaking english?